Apple Blossoms and Clementines,
Lemonade, no spirits,
Secret looks and cryptic mimes,
A rash of stories with no limits.
Hidden clues that claw and bleed,
Peering eyes, they mock,
Exiled cradle and empty seed,
An unused knitted baby sock.
Apple Blossoms and Clementines,
Lemonade, no spirits,
Secret looks and cryptic mimes,
A rash of stories with no limits.
Hidden clues that claw and bleed,
Peering eyes, they mock,
Exiled cradle and empty seed,
An unused knitted baby sock.
Very powerful and poignant, love it.
Thank you π
The last stanza is rather tragic. The joy of children taken away. Perhaps waiting, perhaps waited—ah, may the cradle filled. There is so much love bristling from a knitted baby’s sock. So much care. — This poems got me all messed up. Blessings.
Thank you, I was hoping it would evoke that sort of emotion, not that I’m bad you understand, lol π
haha well you succeeded!
Oh, I do like that, cryptic though it is. Reminded me of Hemmingway’s 6-word novel – was it, ‘For Sale, Baby Shoes, Never Worn’?
Thank you, and yes I was thinking of Hemmingway when I wrote it π