Three Men in a Bus Stop

Time again for Friday Fictioneers. A 100 word story for a weekly changing photo prompt provided by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. I can’t recommend it enough, give it ago or just read the many other, far more talented efforts.


Leggy tapped his foot against the stone, as a disgruntled Hedley sucked in a breath, swallowed and looked up,

“Will you stop that ruddy tapping, you’re killing me”

The tapping increased. Hedley growled.

“Thanks for the support guys” he mumbled. Not really caring which one of them heard.

The wall of muscle on his left moved forward “What time did you say the next bus was?”

Leggy’s tapping went into over-drive,


Muscles’ instantly flexed his chest, his aggression was almost palpable,

The other two shot back “Back down Big Man, we all know your ‘armless’….

36 thoughts on “Three Men in a Bus Stop

  1. Haha! I’m happy to see so many upbeat or humorous stories this week. Some weeks it gets downright depressing (although mine wasn’t one of the former this week.) 🙂
    As for your guys, sometimes it’s just hard to get ahead.


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