Time again for Friday Fictioneers. As you might see I’ve been twiddling, I love a good twiddle… Get yourself over and join the other 100+ participants each week, writing a 100 flash fiction based on the photo prompt provided.
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Time again for Friday Fictioneers. As you might see I’ve been twiddling, I love a good twiddle… Get yourself over and join the other 100+ participants each week, writing a 100 flash fiction based on the photo prompt provided.
Dear Helen,
Perhaps she’ll meet my little one on the way back down. Sally should’ve listened. Good one.
You appear to be linked. 😉
Shalom,
Rochelle
Thank you 🙂
Helen such intrigue and mystery and naughty girl. Well done.
Thanks 🙂
Will there be follow up? Lol I hate mystery endings 🙂
Great build-up of tension as the elevator rose up the floors
Thanks, I’m glad that came across 🙂
Oh dear! She won’t do that again! 😦
This was great, loved the use of the rhyme. Very clever!
Helen, I love the way you used the rhyme and the way you inserted it into the story with the music. Clever! Your story is terrible in such a gently-written way.
janet
Thank you, just trying to experiment a bit 🙂
I find the combination of children, nursery rhymes and horror particularly disturbing, and your story certainly made me shiver. Well done.
Thanks 🙂
love the presentation and the use of the rhyme. that was very eerie! *shivers*
I haven’t got your dark talents, but I’m enjoying experimenting 😉
Wow fantastic use of cultural tropes!
Well written story with suspense and mystery. Good touch at the end.
Poor little girl. Great use of the rhyme. I thought the line “Oh..” worked well.
Oh my, Helen. I was afraid this was going to end badly. Is the flour his signature? That would be creepy. I like the way you tied in the song to the floors. That made it extra eerie. Great story.
Eeek. I’m not so sure I want to pop down to the baker’s this morning now….
Yes Helen, this is great – good story! Thanks, Nan 🙂
Surreal, scary fun, darling!
Ah.. nothing is more scary than the mixture between death and nursery rhyme.
Oh no..not the Baker Man!!!