Time again for ‘Friday fictioneers’. The weekly foray into 100 words of fiction from an ever challenging photo prompt. I am still in my experimental stage, trying new things, new ways of story telling. They don’t always work but hey, nobody’s perfect……..
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Well, that was certainly interesting! Absinthe and pineapple???? What kind of bachelor party was this? Cool use of the text messages.
Cheers, I’m trying not to be predictable 😉
And I love that about you!
Very different. I’ve read long stuff like that but never short.
I like to experiment a bit, not always wisely but if I try something often enough I might find something I’m good at 😉
Like all of it 😉
Dear Helen, you were GOOD at this. Wow – who in the heck would have a bachelor party the night before the wedding? Stupid Wedding Planners fault, I think. Very, very clever use of abbreviations and I really loved it Helen! Good Job! Nan 🙂
Loved the form as well as the content !
An effective presentation of the story. Well done.
This is incredibly clever! Love how things just keep getting worse.
Very creative, Helen! I L’dOL.
That worked really well! I too have often wondered why people have their stag do the night before the wedding.
I hope if he actually ever gets there he can smooth things over 🙂
Dear Helen,
Sounds like the jilted bride is finding comfort already. I love the unique way you told the story.
shalom,
Rochelle
Dear Helen,
BRAVO! BRAVO! BRAVO!
ENCORE!
Aloha,
Doug
Helen, Funny story and very creative. XD I take it there was not a church rehersal. 🙂 —Susan
Yes, absinthe and pineapple really could only result in one thing, even without the bumpy ride! I think your new venture worked wonderfully well! 🙂
Lovely structure. Looks like the bridesmaid has started on the communion wine as well. Some hangovers to follow.
I think the wisest choice was to throw up.. and yes the style worked wonders..
Brilliantly told narrative. Aces up!
i must admit i was confused at how he could read texts when his head just exploded and he was eviscerated. duh… took me some time to see this was very funny and clever:) thanks for the trip.
Helen, I loved that you tried something different! This is not your ordinary wedding day. Nice one!
I can only echo what Doug said, Bravo, encore . . . .”