Here is my weekly attempt at 100 words of fiction for the fabulous ‘Friday Fictioneers’. Unusual for me, but quite deep this week, it may be a new moon or a vitamin deficiency, so I won’t take it too much to heart just yet. If I’m still deep next week, call in the mountain rescue…….
Deep, dark, funny or just downright rude, whatever your inclination get yourself over to the ever welcoming inn of Rochelle Wisoff-Fields and quench your thirst.
Original Photo Copyright : Dawn Q Landau
With a border of salt-edged tears, all the images and memories, the experiences and revelations are separated in my mind. Childhood and adolescence, love affairs and friendships, all neatly boxed into squares.
My conscience is a figure; a keeper of secrets, protector of truth. She’s wise beyond the years already walked and aged beyond the life already lived. Wrapped up well against the cold wind of doubt that often seeps from where I am, she carries my indulgence in her hands. Yet the compassion I crave lays heavy on her shoulders and I feel the weight of every footstep in my mind.
I love how you interpreted this prompt. It’s a beautiful piece of prose.
Thanks Dawn 🙂
Helen, I love the way you interpreted the woman as the conscience! Go deep again; it works. BTW, “salt-edged” deserves a hyphen. 🙂
janet
As ever you’re right, a hyphen has been hastily inserted 😉
A fabulous piece of writing.
Helen, this is . . . well . . . more than lovely!!!!
lovely poetic prose…
What a beautiful story for this photo! The first paragraph is so moving and poignantly written. Love this.
The old woman as the conscience — brilliant 🙂
Nice piece of work Helen, some excellent descriptive work here and it fits the prompt beautifully.
A thinking woman’s view, nicely done! 😯
Lovely piece of writing. Deep, thoughtful, and challenging.
Great piece of writing and very imaginative take on the prompt.
Dear Helen,
A fantastic and provocative interpretation of the prompt. Your prose is impeccable and laden with the care of years. I really enjoyed this piece.
Aloha,
Doug
Dear Helen,
Well imagined take on the prompt. Thought provoking and nicely written.
Shalom,
Rochelle
That was lovely! How beautifully metaphorical and vividly described!
Beautiful choice of words! Lovely!! Wonder when I will be able to move someone with my words!
Gorgeous take on the prompt and beautifully written as always, Helen
Gorgeous interpretation and wording.
Beautifully written…
Wonderful piece, Helen. Beautiful…
Ellespeth
A really neat idea. Your conscience character works so well. I particularly admire how you’ve portrayed the interplay between the ‘I’ and the conscience.
Marg
I like this deep side of you. I found your interpretation of the conscience really intriguing. She knows, doesn’t she? We should trust her. Brava!
Helen, Beautiful, rich, and creative take on the prompt. Well written. 🙂 —Susan
Wow Helen, you nailed a perfect story again. They just keep coming and coming! Good for you.
Nan 🙂
Honest and poetic. Bravo, Helen! 🙂