These last few weeks, real life has taken hold, swallowed me up and spat me back out again. But the light is getting nearer and the tunnel is getting shorter. Normal shenanigans can now resume….. So here’s my contribution to 100 words of fiction for Friday Fictioneers, it’s good to be back.
Photo Copyright : Madison Wood
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Really creepy. I hope things continue to improve for you.
Dear Helen,
I’m sorry to hear you’ve been going through a rough time. I hope things keep getting better and you’re able to find Shalom,
Rochelle
The dead couldn’t talk! Oh, no. Water is usually a cleansing thing, but I guess not always. It’s great to have you back, Helen. I’ve missed you.
That was creepy. My imagination was offering suggestions as to what happened next–so I shut it off. Very well written. The drip, drip, drip cadence added to the tension and suspense.
Oh that dripping adds the sinister picture here.. what a creepy end that seems to come closer.
I like the way you build the tension.
Very intense and suspenseful. I like it!