I haven’t written much prose lately and thought I’m ease myself back gently with the help of Al’s fabulous ‘Sunday Photo Fiction’. Around 200 words of fiction based as loosely as you like around the weekly photo prompt. Follow the link to give it a go.
“A penny for your thoughts” he’d say. And I’d see that questioning look in his eyes, the slight rise of his brow that pulled one eye up higher than the other and he’d smile. I remember that smile.
I remember other things too, his smell, his hair, the coolness of his skin. But it was his smile that I remember the most.
He’d sit and wait for me to answer. He knew I would, I always did. I might play with my hands or look over to the window, maybe even get up and walk over to it, as if the moonlit view outside could somehow answer for me. But I’d always sit back down, look at him and speak.
“I don’t know if I can do it” My grandfather looked at me and smiled. Always that smile.
“It’s like riding a bike” he said,
“You never forget”
I twisted my hands in my lap and nodded.
He stood up, walked over and put his hand on my shoulder.
“I taught you well, my little one, it’s time”
Later that night my teeth sank into the Inspectors throat. I drank my fill, till his body went limp, my ravenous tongue tracing greedily across my fangs.
My grandfather smiled!
8 thoughts on “Grandfather’s Smile”
Wow. Tell me more. I’m thirsty!
First blood! I didn’t see that coming, until it was too late! 🙂
I love it! A total surprise!
Great surprise! I had to swallow hard at the end of it!
I cut my finger yesterday and stuck it in my mouth. It tasted quite good. I wonder…..?
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I didn’t see that coming, quite a twist!
Nice twist. I had images of my own grandfather teaching me how to do things at first but then I realized his grandson is a little vampire! Great writing!
I didn’t see that coming. Absolutely brilliant. I love it. Also the way you used the bike as just metaphors.