Written for Friday Fictioneers. A 100 words of fiction based around the photo prompt provided. This week I’m using my ‘get out of jail’ card and re-posting the piece I wrote for the original prompt back in May 2014…
Text messages between a very late groom and his best man –
What a wonderful scary way of telling of a disaster… no a stag party the night before a wedding is not to recommend…
How come he’s never heard of the church? Sounds like the intended is better off without this one
Oh brilliant and so originally laid out!
Great fun. Sounds like he’ll need a bathos
Sounds like the wedding from hell. Or maybe the groom from hell. Nice construction.
Well, at least the guests all seem to be having a good time without him 🙂
I like the way you structured this. Well done. I must agree with Sandra, it’s either the wedding or the groom from hell.
As Gordon Ramsay would say, “I’m absolutely gob-smacked.” Great format and story to boot. It makes me wonder what the rest of this guy’s day is going to be like.
Super-duper! Five out of five “bottles of beer on the wall, five bottles of beer …”
Fantastically irreverent, loved it