I’m running a bit late this week but didn’t want to miss Friday Fictioneers. Who could resist a 100 words of fiction, a bite size bit of fun that’s less calories than a treat size Snickers.
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Do you wanna hold it
I dunno,
It’s clean, promise. Mary Jane said it was.
Mary Jane don’t know what clean is,
Yeah she does, she showed me hers. It was all pink and clean and smelt of oranges.
I don’t like oranges,
No me neither. Go on, just hold it,
Ok, but just once, it don’t mean nowt if I do it once,
It don’t mean nowt anyway, I did it with Mary Jane, Mary Maude and twice with Billy Ray, cos he let go.
Alright, but it better be quick.
Just hold my hand will ya, you talk too much.
helen midgley 
That made me laugh. Thanks
Cheers, a bit light this week, sometimes I feel I’m a raving serial killer on FF, so many weeks I seem to involve a murder 😉
Welcome to the light side, Luke
That was funny, I did wonder where it was going and what she wanted holding right until the end
that was the intention 😉
Haha, thank goodness it was just a hand they were talking about. In the end, a sweet take! Nice one 🙂
Of course it was a hand 😉
Dear Helen,
At first I wasn’t sure, but I’m glad you were describing hands. 😉
Shalom,
Rochelle
That had me hooked till the end.
Phew 🙂 Fun!
Light and fun. Glad you made it with your 100-words.
Perhaps I need to go and bleach my mind. 🙂 Good one.
I like the way you played with us here, Helen. I suppose a few of us slipped off into the gutter… 😉