If your life was a story in a book you could borrow,
Would you skip through today in the search for tomorrow,
Would you open the page where your childhood came first,
Or go straight to the back and read from reverse.
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If life was begun with the wisdom of age,
Would mistakes still be written upon every page,
Would a lifetime of knowledge erase all the wrong,
Would hindsight determine the weak from the strong.
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If love was revisited again and again,
Would you search for a shelter or drown in the rain.
Would the passions ignited be nourished and fed,
Would you follow your heart instead of your head.
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If the innocence of childhood was a gift to the old,
Would you walk in the park and swing from an oak.
Would you banish the shackles of where you had been,
And never be hindered by what you had seen.
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If your life was a story in a book you could borrow,
There would be no today, no yesterday or tomorrow.
I love all your writings, but really like this one a lot
Thanks, it really is appreciated 🙂
tragic story told in reverse start damage and end with innocence and wonder…like your writing
Thanks for stopping by and commenting, much appreciated 🙂
I absolutely loved this! It is so creative and intelligent. Great work Helen 🙂
Thanks very much 🙂
You’re very welcome 🙂
Top marks Miss H, that’s really very, very good
Thank you, means a lot coming from your fine self 😉
That is lovely. I would like to keep the book, not just borrow it, though. 🙂
Wouldn’t we all, lol 🙂
Awesome concept MeLady 🙂
A book to borrow? nah…I would love to keep it and I would never want the story to end.
Yes it would be one to re-read alright 🙂
I really enjoyed this. Made me think of what a character in my book says at one point, “If we knew what was round the corner, I don’t reckon we’d ever get out of bed.” I like your more hopeful possibilities better!
There is something to be said for surprises, lol 🙂
this is such a beautifully wtitten piece. its simplicity is stunning!
Thank you, me and simple seem to go well together, ha ha 😉
What a great poem, Helen! I’m hoping all is well with you!
Ellespeth
Thanks Ellespeth. Real life taken over unfortunately, writings a bit on the back burner at min. Hope your ok too 🙂
This is such a great poem, loved the idea 🙂
Thanks 🙂
Reblogged this on Sheri de Grom and commented:
I was caught off center as I read the poetry of Helen Midgley. I’ve spent many hours reading my own journals from the past four decades in hopes of capturing accurately the emotions and events that have accutally occurred during Tom’s and my search for the best medical care possible for him. My library shelves have become filled with fournals and then I relegate them to the attic once again.
Helen – I’ve reblogged life-is-a-book to my blog: sheridegrom@wordpress.com. Your poetry always touches my heart and soul. I also added comments.
Ahh, thanks so much, I really appreciate your lovely comment. 🙂
i very much like this piece – i read it the other day – and was short on time to respond. you pose some very interesting questions, which, in all honestly find very conflicting (speaking for myself, of course). i kinda wish i could go straight to the end, but then if i did that, i would be unable to go back to the beginning and remedy the errors or fix misfortunes and situations before they can arise. it is almost bittersweet, if i think about it. i suppose life is better read from the front to the back – though in many ways, it is bittersweet, as well. However, i suspect that when the end comes, most of what we see now as difficulty and pain, will have faded quite a bit and not seem as difficult. xx
Thanks for reading. I’m a ‘read the last page first’ type of girl myself, but not sure if I’d like it that way in real life, the end may just be too much, lol 😉
What a lovely, lovely poem. I read it three times and am going to forward it to some people I know who’d enjoy it.
Thank you.
Patti
Ahh, thanks so much for the lovely comment 🙂
A true masterpiece! I loved it, thank you for sharing your wonderful gift of expression!
Thanks for reading, I only wrote my 1st ever poem in July so I really appreciate the wonderful feedback 🙂
You have such a lovely way with words and I always enjoy reading your poems. You have a clear but concise way of capturing what you have to say. Awesome.
Thank you so much for the lovely comment 🙂
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This is very well put together and thought out! Thank you so much for posting for all of us to read.
Thanks for reading, I’m a bit overwhelmed with the responses to be honest, I don’t think there’s anything on the T.V., lol 🙂
Haha. I am not much of a T.V. watcher, so I would not know.